Thank you for the feedback. Especially after seeing your submission, I see how much the layout leaves to be desired! Do you mind if I ask what you use for doing your layouts? I have no idea how you even being to put something together that looks as good as yours.
I use a program called Affinity, which is free to download. The real trick is that I read and learn about layout all the time, both in terms of theory and practice, You can do it too.
