Holy fire!
The art is simple and yet very amazing and fitting.
Music enhances the atmosphere, but as a Beepbox user myself I could really hear that it was made by this program pretty clearly and I think music closer to the original game OST would be very nice (but don't get me wrong, the music in game still is good and I praise you for making all of this alone).
The writing felt a little weird to me, but I liked it, it was a pretty interesting alternate view of the story.
I also like that it was short (as I don't like longer visual novels) and the number of different endings was very nice. What a lot of people miss in reviews is a good UI, which was very easy to find myself in and very rich in options. I especially liked the settings which had a lot of customizability;
but... had some finicky problems with the changing pages in the saves being overlapped by the save slots (idk when I tried to click through the pages I found myself clicking the save slots).
I also found an untranslated ending subtitle in spanish when it was supposed to be english.
As an ending note I wanted to ask: How long did it take for you to make this game?
Hope you answer me and keep up the good work!