Looming dread indeed! This definitely has a mood, and I quite like the clean layout!
A few favorite things:
- The premise is killer, both as a concept and as it is written
- Surfacing at the ash cistern
- Very useful internal pointers (e.g., "full reference on p. 4")
I would love an example or two of how the Beneath might manifest!
"fine as flour, warm as a held hand." Nice!