Incredible art and layout. This is probably my favorite submission I have seen for Visual Design. I love the concept and the use of the theme.
I would have liked to have the Living Candles developed a bit more mechanically. Having a Golem, for example, that is only vulnerable to fire damage would be essentially impossible for most parties to kill in D&D. On the flip side, having a bunch of wax work villagers and rats that are only vulnerable to damage attack a mid-level party has the potential to be really fun and force some creative thinking. For example, maybe they could also be only resistant to slashing damage? Or perhaps a table of outcomes, some positive some negative, when attacked by non-flame weapons.
I loved the tables, especially the bonus room table. The optional bonus at the end was also super fun and something I definitely want to do.