This feels like an adventure that needs more space than what the jam allows. I’m hooked by what’s here, but then felt like it ended just when it was getting really interesting. It would be cool to see an expanded version of this one day.
I really appreciate learning about a new author I was unfamiliar with in the note at the end too. Well done!
Hi Cats! Thank you so much for your kind words. Yeah, I was definitely feeling the pinch of the space limits by the time I got to the end of it, and resigned myself to doing the best I could with painting in broad strokes; there was also some additional detail in the encounter tables that I wound up cutting for the same reason. So it goes. Working within the limitations of the jam was a great challenge, though!
An expanded version sounds like a very cool idea, and I'll definitely put some thought into what that might look like, and maybe add it as a tier at some point. After I get some of these other projects off my plate, of course....
