short and effective.
a little slice of life between two girls in a failing relationship. you capture the push-pull between clover going over to take care of ivy when she calls... and her uncomfortable feelings about sex and relationships, driving her away from ivy.
i especially liked the ending, where we see clover's pov fade out, and the title screen fade in. feels appropriately cyclical... like she'll be back to take care of ivy soon. well done on making your first vn!
thank you! i'm glad you liked it.
!! yeah !! that's really what i was going for. i'm really happy that got across <3
the end bit came together quite late in production and was one of the less planned out parts, so i'm glad to hear you liked it :) and i really like your perspective on it - the cyclical nature of their relationship is something i wanted to highlight so i'm happy that it aligns with that.
and again thank you! this whole experience has really motivated me to make more!
