For v0.3.0:
Good use of AI art. That is exactly what AI should be used for.
Yukari is too big. She should be a loli. But I know she's aged up for patreon standards or whatever. It still had to be said.
[BUG] After you made a choice with arrow keys and enter, the UI selection is on the rosario symbol in the bottom right. That means when you advance the text with space, the menu symbols keep getting toggled on and off.
[BUG] If you choose Kurumu to be your first, Moka will still be referred to as your first after the scenes merge into the main story again.
The H-scene writing was inspired by translated jap porn. All in all it is good, but a few kinda awkward phrases made it obvious enough for me to notice. This is not really meant as critique, but I sure hope we won't see any "ass melting" at some point.
I can feel your passion in your work! And you keep it close to the source material! It's a real treat to read! Keep it up!