This game... took me by surprise. It was such a surreal and charming experience. I don't think i've ever experienced anything quite like it. ^^
The game starts surprisngly strong. I was super pumped to start my text adventure. the music and the text really hyped it up and I was intrigued to find out what happens next. I was not prepared for the video clips that appeared throughout the game. Everythnig about this felt oddly nostalgic and bizzare.
The quality of the writing wasn't quite as good after the introduction, and the video clips became more and more bizzare, but to be honest none of that really mattered, because I could see that this game had a lot of passion put into it. Considering this is your first game, i'm quite impressed. I wish you to hold on to that passion as you learn and improve your skills. As you practice and manage to finish more and more games you'll keep getting better at it.
Unfortunately I died to the deathclaw and ended my adventures there, lol.
PS: Bonus points for originality. I'm glad you decided to go with something out of the ordinary for your first game, rather than some typical shooter/platformer game.