Cool game! I quite liked the story and the pixel art, and the music was a good choice too.
I must admit that the waiting part at the end was a bit boring, though. I may or may not have booted up a mobile game to kill the time. I think it could have been interesting if there was some kind of survival minigame you had to play whilst waiting for your merchandise to sell, for instance something where you defend it from thieves. That way instead of regretting setting your prices so high because “Ugh now I need to wait for awhile” you regret it because “Oh man do I really have to live for THAT long??”
I might also mention that the main menu and the computer UI were kind of bugged, at least on my computer. The main menu was too large, whilst the text on the computer at the beginning was spilling out of it. Unity UI stuff is nefarious.
That being said, good work! I thought the game overall good and had fun with it. Maybe I just relate too hard to being in crippling debt after buying a bunch of stuff I don’t need. They’re coming for my other kidney next.