This was definitely a unique experience, much much different from what I was expecting going into it. The narrative of it is lovely - And so is the narration!
It did give me Stanley vibes to an extent but not fully.
I also loved how each level fit the narrative of the entrepreneur's thinking - which get's wild by the 3rd and I love it. It is an unhinged narrative that fits the game's style quite nicely. And the simple art/models fit that as well.
As for the levels themselves, without the hint I would have never known to turn back for the first level. I thought I was doing something wrong - taking a look at the description made it known that I needed to head back.
The 2nd level I also did not know what to do at all so I just looked around and left - I thought I'd be able to throw darts(was not). I also do not know what the board actually meant because of it. But it might be that I just missed something important.
The 3rd level was much fun, though the gun controls were a bit drifty, they were fun. The golf was fun and each of the table was really well designed. It was definitely difficult to score, but I did get 1 golf ball in so I was happy with that. Maybe the gun controls could have been better and the reset board thing could have been conveyed better to the player?
the ending of 3rd level was great - it was humorous but thoughtful as well. And the poem in the epilogue was also written well - really encapturing an idiot entrepreneur. (one more thing, the game taught me how to bloody write the word Entrepreneur. thanks!)
overall this was fun, really great submission for the jam and I enjoyed it. Awesome work!