Really good game, you captured the style of a visual novel so well. Everything was super polished. The art style and voice acting were all top tier. Great writing and concept too, also really well designed characters; my favourites were Marv and Helen. When you get caught by the boss it had a really imposing character design and voicework which I think was cool. The ending was kind of depressing but I guess it reflects reality lol. Also the background music was great.
I think the task on the computer had the music a bit too loud plus it felt a bit out of place when you compare the style of the visuals and music. The task where you organise files alphabetically wasn't really explained, so it was hard to know what to do at first. And then sometimes the voice acting would switch which side of the headphones it's majorly heard in, so changing that would be great. Overall it's such a unique game and I've not seen a proper visual novel submitted before so good job on getting it done!