you have a really good idea here! reminds me of presentable liberty, which (whilst a very dark game which i'd be careful about if it might be too triggering) tells its story similarly, especially with the game of escapism inbetween messages from the outside world. i'd totally check this out again once it's finished! more time to write interactions like this and more fleshed out characters could do really well here.
(also, just a small suggestion, but during the videogame sections i thought it would be a pretty cool idea if it were literally impossible for the player to beat the highscore set by allie and freya)