Hey! I really enjoyed the concept, and I think the art and story complement each other really well. One thing I especially appreciated was the onboarding. Even though the minigames were fast-paced, I always understood what I was supposed to do before they started, which made the challenge feel fair rather than confusing. I wrote down a few observations that I hope are useful if you decide to keep developing this build or apply them to future projects.
- After pressing Start, the game appeared to be cropped on my screen (tried it in both Chrome and Opera with the same result). Because of that, I couldn't read all of the text, and the UI felt a bit difficult to navigate since I was missing part of the information.
- The endings of the minigames felt a little abrupt. I wasn't always sure if I had completed them successfully or failed them, so some additional visual or audio feedback at the end of each challenge could make the transitions feel clearer.
- I would have loved to hear some background music during the story and minigames sections! The visuals and writing already create a nice atmosphere, and I think music would make those moments even more immersive.
Overall, I had a great time with it. I think the onboarding is one of the game's strongest points, and I hope some of these observations are helpful for this project or for your future games. Thanks for sharing it!