Wow, wasn't excepting such a cool concept xD The art is amazing, the fact you play is coach is novel, and having the challenge in itself tell the story is really well though off ! Congrats on the game, it was - so - fun ! :)
The only thing that oculd be improved i think is not to have to press space at the end. Each time I saw a punctuation mark, I tried to type it and didn't understand why it didn't work, it might be adding friction when none is necessary :)
