I thought the narrative was thought provoking: the intro hook was very compelling and made me want to play and see how the player's story unfolds.
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It was interesting how in the intro, despite the player questioning if he lived a fulfilling life, you chose to have him go through and eat people's souls to live even longer - like he had no redeeming qualities despite his end-of-life revelation. I thought his character arc would have been stronger if the gameplay was his history of misdeeds leading up to the retrospective intro. The fact that I'm even thinking about all this shows you created something magical in the storytelling. For that I give it top marks!