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As some people already mentioned some of the text systems need improvements(dialogue and journal reading). I think maybe you should try having the player be able to click on it and it will pop up like readable notes since the aesthetic of the messy journal is good. Also(might just be me) but clicking through the journal pages didn't seem intuitive like the buttons themselves didn't scream click me. Finally, maybe figure out a way for it not to be an info dump(I know that's kinda difficult for a game like this). Other than that I think you're off to a good start completing the game and I like the concept of the player checking the plant border permits.

I also like the messy journal aesthetic but the writing will be improved a bit  😅 I agree, thank you for your feedback; I'll be sure to make sure those changes are made o7 :)