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(4 edits)

What I Loved

  • Loved the gameplay loop, finding things with a time limit is exciting
  • You being a super jumping paper clip

What I Wished

  • I had no Idea I could interact with anything until reading comment on the submission page, wish there was some controls listed somewhere like the page description
  • After a few more attempts I wasn't able to find the apple even after looking through the boxes on the top shelf twice :(
  • Wish I was skilled enough to finish the game
  • Some variety of sounds (maybe the fan is spinning and swooshing sound, stuff like that)

What needs Work

  • Graphics leave a lot to be desired (model variety and placement was good just needed some textures)
  • Mouse didn't get locked to the game was very annoying
  • When the timer hit 0 the just game froze

Overall enjoyed my experience

For a first time submission it needs work but Good Job submitting a game that runs, that is the hardest part

Nice Game!

(+1)

Thank you so much for a detailed analysis. I will sure improve the points you mentioned. I really wanted to add hovering effect like when your curson goes on any interactble you could see press E to interact (something like that e.g in granny games) but I didn't had enough time left. I will sure improve further. Thank you so much it made my day.