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This game was crushing, very beautifully made and written. I wish it was just a tiny bit longer and a few more things to do (n-no I am not sad that I can't spend more time with the game)

For critique, the models were a tad bit hard to differentiate between one another and I wish the UI was a bit more prominent when you can interact with stuff, for me it was mostly spamming the interact button for me until something popped up. Some models also did not feel cohesive to the other objects (mainly the player character) but the writing more than made up for it. The UI was also very well designed

Despite that though, you know your way with words, the game was very beautiful

Thank you for the kind words! And for giving such thorough constructive criticism. Since I started learning HTML5 3 months ago, I've been mostly free styling these creative projects, so UI is definitely my biggest issue. Adyna having hundreds of more polygons was in fact because I restyled a pre-made model, so it doesn't really flow well. I'll definitely work on these in the future! >:3