i think you did a great job in the short timeframe! I thik the concept is strong, setting up a solution and watching it succed or fail. I think, if you keep working on the game, a way to make failing more fun would be great! and as others already pointed out, the tutorial could benefit from some tweaks. the wordplay was funny and i think it is something like a unique selling point, but it distracted partly from the tutorial, maybe a bit less is more :D
but overall well done!