Great to see a visual novel in the jam! Good job team :)
Things I loved:
- Compelling narrative, with well-executed story beats
- Audio cues + art changes sold the scene shifts well
- Key art was very lovely and sold the vibe
- Mouse particle was a nice touch ;3
Things I loved to see:
- I think a few bespoke font choices would do wonders here, e.g. italics for distinguishing thoughts / narration, different colours for different characters, etc
- A bit of interactivity wouldn't go astray, choosing the name was great but maybe a few dialogue options (even if they don't matter) would place the player in the shoes of the protag a bit more
- I reckon a key art of the bracelet would go hard, especially for the ending <3
- EDIT: Oh I did have a bug to report too - had the Youtube channel one repeat itself a few prompts later, I assume replacing one of the other ones!