Really love the story elements! I liked how there's sort of this Undertale style of gameplay, where you're deducing what action to take (what to say) for each new person. It gives a bit of strategy and some reasoning which is great! At first, I didn't know you had to double click the menus on the computer, maybe something small to clear that up (Or maybe I missed it)? I think the dialogue options were also a little hard to select, maybe because the hitboxes were small? But also the differentiation between highlighted and non-highlighted options was pretty small, so maybe making selected options more distinct would help too. I also think there should be one more click to seek to the next dialogue before being given your options. I would accidentally click trying to seek to the next dialogue, but would instead select one of my dialogue options. Having an additional click before my options would help! Also wasn't too sure how the ratings and money played into the game, but not a big issue since the core game loop is clear.
Otherwise, really love the aesthetic, the game loop was fun, and the game is very charming and fun! One of my favorite entries so far! Congrats on making such a good experience!