Thank youuuuu!! This comment is making me glow, heheheheheh~ 
I've gotten so used to writing in a minimalist, screenplay-esque style for my games and VNs; this story is one of the first times I've written longer stretches of more traditional prose in a while, so I wasn't entirely sure how well it'd turn out. Needless to say, I'm very happy to hear you think so highly of it (and the music, too!)~
P.S.: LISTEN. Listen. It's really not that bad, as long as you've got a pointy stick handy~