Post by gregsolo in The Voice in the Shed jam comments

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I loved the story! I have to know how it ends!!

A few minor things: a couple of typos here and there (nothing that proofreading won't fix!), I got no audio (not sure it it supposed to be?)

I really enjoyed the storytelling, and yes you are definitely an artist!

Thank you! I must admit I intended it to end with the scream - a little bit like a creepy pasta?

I'll have to recheck for the typos, thanks for letting me know! And yeah no audio in this story, maybe I'll add it later: we'll see ^^

Thank you again for your comment and your kind words!