Game's not bad. Though some glaring issues is the voice actor's volume is very quiet. I would really think about boosting the volume of the voices and or adding in a volume slider for voice. That and the other not as glaring issues is Chesa stops walking if you get a few steps ahead or behind her. I would have her auto walk to the next location regardless of the player's distance to her. But beyond that, not bad. Keep it up.
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