Firstly I do really like the aesthetic, although I wish the art was more consistent such as pixel sizes. I found the start very slow with the text and I didn't really learn what to do so it was less enjoyable. I think if you refined the gameplay to have a balance with the narrative this could be awesome! SFX and music would also add wonderfully to this, just a bit more time and I think you'd have a really fun game in your hands! Good job though :)