I love the concept. It really shows how it can affect you when you, when you don't have the finances you need.
Very interesting and well executed game! Well done.
One thing I would like to see is, how much a job is going to pay you, even if its an approximation and also how a bad job is going to affect your morale for example.
Also I didn't quite understand what I had to do in the writing job xD
But anyway, you did an amazing job, well done!