I absolutely agree, no one should spend time waiting for this to progress. They should go out and live! That's sort of what I was trying to say, through a joke
I understand your point, but I'm not sure if this is the best medium to pportray that idea. If you like philosophy, perhaps you should look into writing essays or thought pieces. I hope you take no offense, I agree that your idea is good but what I think is that you can polish the execution, and perhaps it would be interesting to read a short story from you about mortality, waiting and how videogames absorb people's lives and what it makes of them. That is something I would be happy to spend time on.