(also has no commentary. Your vn/game is at 17:41.)
I enjoyed reading it! I think most have been said by the other commenter at this point, but yeah. Limited color usage on this one is really cool. The art is really good! Expressive characters, as well as really nice characterization/writing (Noel’s obsessiveness, and Bianca’s analytical behavior.) Kind of predicted they like have the same thing. Regardless of that I enjoyed it. You’re doing good. Another good one. Good luck on your future endeavors!