Fantasy and Romance are the colours I mixed up the first time I played!
wildly critical comment given the state of your submission
Absolutely. Mine’s a complete trash fire. But this feedback wasn’t meant to insult, or say someone’s game is better than the other. It’s from the view of a player or play tester. And it’s what might be improved - from my point of view. Which, again, is not perfect, or universal. It’s one data point. Feel free to discard it. Having said that - this is what my experience was, and what you may or may not want to take in to account if you wanted to work further on the project. Or to inform future projects.
I know mine has barely any “gameplay” I’m working on it, over time :)
Your one, the resolution didn’t work very well on smaller screen sizes (will also apply to phones). The colours weren’t that distinct - someone who’s colour blind might have more difficulty. And icons for genres were too small - you might have posters, or “labels” or floor panels or …… etc that might smooth the gameplay. Or you might not. It might work better for diehard fans to leave it like this.
Yup. Totally didn’t catch that you could “cycle” with q/e. From the initial playthrough, I think I got WASD, and interact, and that’s it. Might be helpful to dynamically pop up small letters ‘q’ ‘e’ by the sides of the character’s head - Or by the book stack - once it gets over size 2. OR not. Again, it’s your game, and your decision. It might take too much screen real estate. It might not be diagetic UI. …. etc. I’m saying what I had difficulty being communicated / intuitive. Maybe other people don’t have that issue. Maybe it’s “not worth fixing” given time constraints.
And yeah. There is no sprint. The AI moves faster than you. It seems like you’re meant to aim for “perfection” I found this incredibly frustrating from a gameplay perspective. You might think this is hilarious. That’s your prerogative. I mean, there are rage games out there - Getting Over It. This doesn’t quite have that vibe. Nor does it quite work as a power fantasy for me. Again, one data point. Game may or may not be for me. Or maybe I didn’t play the game in the right context: with other people around.
World’s your oyster man :)
Be free!