Ok, first impressions, respect for animating this.
First off, if the game says that you have seven days to enter the mansion or else you lose the rights to and then taking more than 7 in-game days to enter feels like something is wrong, unless just signing the paperwork counted to avoid losing possession of the mansion, maybe the time frame to enter the mansion should be bigger?
Secondly, a menu where we can see the girl's stats would also be nice to give us an idea of how we are manipulating them and transforming them.
Thirdly, I think the order of the images is wrong. Anyways, it looks promising, I love the references, referential humor is one of my favorite kind.
