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I don't know if anyone else is experiencing this, but your scritch player seems to stall whenever I try to listen to it. I'd like to listen to this in its entirety and give any feedback I can, so any chance you could share the audio file?

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Thank you for the alert, ima try to do something

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I reposted the track in a downloadable form, you can find it on my page. Thanks again for the alert, and the future feedback as well <3

Thanks! Here's my notes.

I think you've got a nice vibe in this track that fits the jam's theme quite nicely. I especially like how you give different instruments to take on a melody or solo.

My main piece of feedback is that I personally think the overall balance between the instruments could be a touch better IMO. To my ears the drums and bass felt like they overpowered the guitars and flute (I think?) quite a bit. It fills up space nicely, especially how you pan the drums, but I think the rhythm guitar and bass could be flipped both in their respective presence (volume, mostly) in the mix as well as their panning. Generally speaking, I don't tend to pan the bass at all personally and instead pan the guitar parts.

Thanks for sharing what you made, keep up the good work :)