I'm so glad the comments section for this opened up!
I really wanted to put down my thoughts and feelings for this VN, so I hope you don't mind!
Honestly, I really like the premise, a really popular vocalist and song writer falls for someone who doesn't know who they are and/or what they do.
The character models are unique in terms of style and seems really fitting to their personalities, and I really enjoy that you clearly put your heart into it.
I am kind of confused as to how Koa can be as unique as he is and yet Bev has no idea who he is, and no one in the whole crowd of people at the club notices that he's there with the MC.
I am also curious as to how Luis got into the friend group when both MC and Bev really don't like him. Is he blackmailing Bev or something? She seems like a headstrong enough lady that she wouldn't just allow Luis to just talk over her and invite himself to things.
That aside I find the narrator to be pretty charming in a cheeky way (And very helpful in telling us how the saves work), and I really like the cafe background, because there's something about it and the buildings we see that makes it feel like it's in a building that houses a bunch of shops, and they're tucked into the corner of the second floor, which is why they gain little to no customers.
I also wonder if the MC has a relationship with the owner of the cafe considering how they're working the whole cafe by themselves, though that could be due to the slow nature of it.
I know this is your first time coding, the story is pretty cohesive and I made sure to follow the project, I can't wait to see what more you do!