This is so good! Amazing writing and I love the framing device of going through different systems. The character voice, sense of humor, and tone are all truly so strong and it perfectly conveys its ideas. Fantastic job.
The art is also very stylish and creative (the gambling diagrams especially are cool) but it's mostly hidden behind the text box, so I had to keep hiding the UI to see it. Is that deliberate?
Thank you very much!! Those aspects were very important to me and I'm very glad to hear that they've come through
As for the art and NVL, i think that was a victim of me making a VN "for me"; I personally find the text box "flickering" or constantly pulsing in and out very annoying so I usually just let it ride, but in retrospect I probably should have had the rest of the gambling diagrams show the transitions like the labouchere;;; The deadline was looming rather large at the time so you'll just have to receive my apologies on that front
