Hi! Thank you so much for the review/rating. Overall, I agree with you. A lot of the flaws from the early game come from my inexperience as a writer/story teller. There's a lot I want to change whenever I do get to remaking the game, but for now I want to focus on actually finishing the main story-line. At the end of the day, Eden is very much a project for me to learn, I never expected it to get this big. Definitely trying to figure out how to balance the relationship with the story since I completely agree, the main selling point of the genre is the relationships you can build with the ladies.
Yeah, keep going. If you want to revise the earlier parts, that's cool but not absolutely necessary right now.
By the way, the deciding factor for me to give your game a shot was the "C*ddling, k*ssing, h*nd-h*lding" tag. These little intimate interactions during the events of the story already go a long way to make the relationships believable and not just confined to individual lewd scenes. I also like the interaction between Natasha, Gianna, and the MC after his trip with Gianna. The conversation felt right, and it's good that he puts Natasha first and keeps her in the loop.
Thank you! I absolutely want to revisit it because yeah... you learn a lot in your first year and a half of development.
I genuinely enjoy those little romance-first moments and I think that's the biggest thing about "finding my style" as a writer. I want the lewd scenes to be ingrained in the story and not something that happens and we don't talk about it. Chapter 6 Part 1 will have a lot of that, so stay tuned!