I really enjoyed it although I think the stages are too mild compared to the rest of the cast. No spoilers but stage 5 to 6 transition was brutal 😂. Her story isn't over so guess I'm just looking forward to the rest of it. Dialogue on point, though a gradual change in her facial expression would be great.
Rachel, my queen! Great job with her arc, and the professor, hope there's more of her to come too. You're struggling to squeeze all 4 coworkers into one frame at work I see 🥴.
Don't worry, she's not done yet! I just figured that was a good stopping point for version .27. I definitely wanted to take her content in a darker direction and explore that side of feederism. Writing that was a real change of pace! Yeah, I thought to myself as I was going along with her story that the stage 5 to 6 transition was...important for her development lol. The facial changes are coming, she's about to enter a whole new arc....
I'm really happy with how Rachel turned out! She was honestly the character I was least excited about out of the three coworkers, but ended up REALLY loving how she developed!
