I just read Puppy Girl Dog Fighting, and I really liked it! The art and atmosphere were gorgeous, and the story felt so tense and so real. Dot's emotions came through beautifully, and I couldn't help but let myself be stuck in her shoes. The feeling of being trapped in a cruel world, the pain of rejection, the daydreaming about what could be. I find myself thinking of those things a lot, and PGDF helped me feel seen in that way. Also, this is definitively the hottest VN I've read so far. The girls look so soft and yet so strong too. I found myself daydreaming along with Dot. I might be biased because my gf is very similar to Onyx. :3
Was "Chain Gang All Stars" an inspiration for this? If not, I think the writer would really enjoy reading it.