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Good first jam game. I think the concept is nice and really creative; cool to see a stealth game. And it's fun to do objectives without him seeing. Also the art is cute especially the cover art. Some of my issues were;

- I don't like how the task bar pops up at the start of the game while the game is un-paused (usually the task bar pauses the game) and if you forgot which key closes the task bar then it'd be nice if it said "o closes task bar" on screen
- I think it's a bit too hard to actually do all the tasks you're given, since when he stands on a spot it's pretty impossible to go near him. Making him walk to different spots and making the time to finish the tasks be more generous before getting fired, would be good
- It doesn't make much sense to me how he knows whether the logs are cut down or not when they're not in range. I think it would be cooler if he only fired you once he walks up to the location and his cone of vision sees that you haven't cut down the trees yet

Other than that I think it has great potential and I'm happy for you about how many ratings your game is getting!

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Thank you so much!I always love seeing such detailed comments,it is super motivating to continue since I was so scared of posting this.For the task bar,thanks for pointing it out,earlier it was not shown on the screen but people forgot to check it out,thanks for letting me know,I'll fix it.

I'll pause the game,it must have slipped from my notice.

For completing the tasks,you do need to use shop's items(press E) and divert him or pause him.

For the third point,that was what I was trying to accomplish,for eg,for the logs,he goes near the tree grove in center.I think I made the vision cone too aggressive though and I'll try to work on map design.Maybe I'll add some timer kinda bar? to show next investigation and make it lenient.Thank you so much for your review!