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This was a lil nice story and a very handsome Jun! I hope he's getting better soon, so we could grab a coffee or two :D

Also, it was a bit confusing to me to see "Me" regardless of mc talking or thinking. Adding italics to thoughts or keeping narration without the name helps a lot^^

Hi! I'm happy you loved it ! I hope he gets better soon as well !  

I'm sorry it was confusing but thoughts are already in italic while dialogues are not, and as she is the narrator, I think it would be confusing to not have the "Me" attached to her thoughts.