The character writing in "Stormside" (other game by same author, on indefinite hiatus) was awesome, but I felt it relied a bit too heavily on the large cast, allowing for several tropey characters to each fill specific roles and gaps. Despite this though, it was still a huge step above most other porn games. When I saw the premise of this one, I was a bit sceptical that the quality would still be high, given the somewhat limited love interests, as well as it's more grounded approach. At least as "grounded" as a porn game can be, lol.
If anything though, the writing improved markedly, and there are points where I completely forget that I am playing a porn game at all. The main girl (I called her something else, so idk what her canon name is) is very fleshed out as a character, and it honestly feels like I'm reading a book, or watching an episode of a rom-com sometimes. Having a character like this elevates the H-scenes to a new level in my opinion. But even outside of porn, this is a really well thought out story, with even better characters. "Girl one" takes the cake but they're all great so far. I would be perfectly happy paying for and playing a SFW version of this game.
Idk if the person who made this is reading the reviews still, but I just wanted to take time out of my day and say that I really think you have a gift. If H-games are your passion then bully for you, but I truly think that you could find great success in a more traditional story game as well. Be it a visual novel or otherwise, you have a knack for creating interesting characters and letting them play off each other in a way that feels natural and fun. I really hope that you can find enough time in your personal life to foster that skill, regardless of how you go about that.
Thanks for the game!