The only thing it needs work on is the actual scene connectivity. It's odd that some scenes trigger from selecting talk while others need story after you do the talk minigame. Alternatively the number of times I couldn't do anything with "Zoe" because she was exclusive time of day for the first half of her stuff and then those times of day she would be in an area I couldn't access resulted in her being the last one I could finish. Then there were the weird times the MC just suddenly had no facial hair, some facial hair, and full beard out of nowhere xD. And last thing, the number of times one of the girls said "you should have warned me" directly after multiple lines of warning was weird. Like some of the writing was disjointed here n there. Good writing, just out of place from time to time.
Having consistency is kinda key for this type of visnov, especially when she flat out tells you what days to work out with her only for it to be pointless to keep track of days lol.