Hey, this was a very cinematic visual novel! I liked the care and thought put behind the main menu, game menu, and visual novel itself. The neutral 3rd ending was my favorite. The music and sound effects were also a nice touch that added to the overall atmosphere to the game, too.
Although, it was a bit disappointing that two choices lead to the same ending. It would have been interesting if the protagonist actually pushed the potential love interest out of the carriage itself to see what would have happened in such a circumstance. However, I still liked it and gave it a 4/5 stars, as it was a short and haunting experience.
Furthermore, even before I played this, I decided to contribute to reach the rest of its monetary stretch goal. I don't know if it will be for this visual novel, your up and coming project, or for personal use, but regardless for whatever reason, I'm always happy to help fellow indie game developers. :D
Keep up the good work! :)