:( I really liked it. the character art is really cute. the story is sad. i can see a version of this story where the flashbacks are the same, but the future selves are different, where they have a happy ending... which really heightens the heartbreak. i also like the way it's written. forgive me if this is weird to say, but english-first-language writers sometimes fall into the same sentence structures and wordings, which gets dull. the wording here is different and refreshing. it made it more interesting to read.
oh, and heads up---during the second visit to Luce's apartment, there's a part where the two sprites are on top of each other and I can't see Pam's expressions. not sure if this was an accident, so i wanted to let you know