huhh. jesus.
it was very difficult to read. im not sure what to feel about it, about the characters. why would she do that, and where does this scenario come from -- well, i can somewhat imagine. it's such a violent world. everyone has scary worms in their brain. it'll be on my mind for a while. the story pulled me in deep and the ending hit...
using flowers as sprites is such a cool unique unique decision. i really enjoyed that. it looks beautiful.
the parallel narratives are very well done. i was a little puzzled at first by the choice between he/him and she/her, then surprised ! aah, so cool. great work. fucked up