Greetings. I hope you're having a good evening.
Somehow what impressed me most about this short lil thing is how it managed to both authentically discuss the subject of suicide while also choosing to not take itself entirely seriously.
On the serious side of things, I think the symbolism with "bottling up my feelings" being layered over a cracking bottle of liquor (i suppose it could have been soda but that didn't really feel like the vibe) almost took my breath away. Very evocative without really saying anything. I think this story plays so well by showing us things that add context to what the text is doing without TALKING about it directly. There were two bottles of medication on that sink. There's a lot that says without you really needing to say anything else. This person is clearly suffering, and i sympathized with them a lot.
On the funnies. I thought they were all tasteful and very lovely. The pacing was just excellent. Every sad moment felt like it had its space before the sillies jumped back in.
Such a fun story that had me gripped from start to finish. Excellent work :))))))
PS. I like the funky text on this page rlly cool :)