Oh, I'm so glad it was helpful! I always worry I'm being a pest when I do this kind of feedback pass. My sympathies for the long development and the layout artist switch-up - the end product's well worth all that effort, I promise! All those edits sound super nice, and I adore the Oracle as an addition to Prospero's Dream.
My only remaining thought is that if the dumbwaiters are meant to be used as a possible way of moving around the restaurant, then it probably shouldn't say that they're "too small for people" in the dumbwaiter text box.