Even though the story seems realistic, the execution often feels disjointed and rushed. We haven’t really gotten to know Lilia yet—we haven’t seen any likable or appealing traits in her—when suddenly she becomes Elena’s girlfriend and immediately starts abusing her. I didn’t feel well connection to the characters or immersion in the story; the protagonist simply goes with the flow rather than participating in her own story. Still, for a first visual novel, this is a decent start. I hope the next one will be deeper and better! Good luck.