You did well with the short-form dialogues, I can't remember anything specific being longer - its more just that I felt obligated to go interact with everything again after every event, just in case there's a new line, which is a commendation to your writing really, I didn't want to miss a single bit of it :p I understand if my suggestion feels like an egregious amount of work for minor QoL, it's certainly more work then the short-line version, just wanted to throw it out there as I think it's helpful to know any quibbles, small as they may be ;)