I wouldn't mind helping as well if you don't already have someone to proof read it. The text seemed like it was ran through a translator. So it loses some of the flow and punch to its wording.
Yes, the dialogue when caught as well as the in game descriptions. CircularFans games have the same problem with their text. It's servicable but you can tell it was either auto transalated or not written by a native speaker if that makes sense?
