Wow! I've played quite a few games so far in this jam, and this has probably been my favorite experience so far. Fantastic story telling, and the choice of medium really made it hit home. The dialogue was perfect, and the little bits where you gather open-ended input (especially the one time I encountered when you actually let through at the end without replacing it) were amazing. The first ending I got was a real gut-punch, and I mean that in the best possible way (the second one was much happier).
I definitely did not expect to see any VN's in a 3-day jam, and certainly nothing of this quality. The only critique I have is that I would add a little bit of CSS to turn off `user-select` so that the text blurbs don't get selected as you're clicking through.
You should be really proud of this. Just amazing all around.