Thanks so much! That’s a great feedback - I’ll add a date to the text after the jam! Thank you for playing!
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He kept saying soon. She kept waiting. One small deferral links to the next until it's a chain he can't undo.
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Ahh, thank you so much!! Reading this really made my day. 😊 Jake isn't really a bad guy - just someone who keeps telling himself there's always tomorrow/soon. I think a lot of us have been there. And thanks for noticing the sleeping foreshadowing too! really appreciate you taking the time to play and leave such a thoughtful comment. It means a lot!
I would say 2 in total - Mia & Daniel's is one (with 2 slightly different wordings at the end), and the Dream one is another. Thanks for playing it multiple times!!
I guess, yeah, the Dream one is more optimistic, but it's sadly just a dream. The other one, with the "choose to come" option, became sadder with the dance happening behind him as he left, and life still goes on.
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